A Poetic Preview

Apr 12 2012

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Drunk Douche in a Bar

Drunken, douchey
Sunken, sloshy
The great ogre slumps upon
the bar fake, heavy with granite
hands clutching smoke, drinks
the cause of his violence.

Drunken, angry
Swollen, flashy
The grave mother smoulders on
the tear, make-up heavy tonight
body feeding smoke, drinks
the child, she’s slave, silenced

Dank and, dreary
Sullen, chirpy
The ancient man, shuffles on
No tears, never sleepless the night,
from crying screams, drink
live. mould. Whole life missing

A Lifeless Hole
A Life Less Whole

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3 Responses to A Poetic Preview

  1. Slippery Pete says:

    Favourite Line:
    The great ogre slumps upon
    the bar fake, heavy with granite

    In particular the words, bar fake.

    Lifeless hole, like a vagina attached to a barren womb?
    Life Less Whole, like a vagina filled with pudding?

  2. Good stuff. It reminds me of drinking myself into a hospital.

  3. francine says:

    sounds like a great bar!

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